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"When Roses Cry" is the first published novel. It is not the first
completed book. That started when I was a kid and wrote a fantasy
book about some wizard that saved his town. This was in fourth grade
and from there start my love of writing. After that I wrote a variety of
stories and even finished a book called "Heatwave." It was nice but not
realistic and will probably never see the light of day.
WRC started as an idea that spawned from religion and psychology
class at The Ohio State University. We talked about people suffering
from multiple personality disorder and how religion plays apart. When
Roses Cry went through a variety of changes and I learned how to
write a book professionally. I tried to get it publish by the traditional
means but received a plethora of rejection letters. I even tried other
book ideas with more no's. Finally I heard about Publish America and
used them to publish my first book. That was great and exciting time. It
was cool to see the contract and even told other people to use them
(Kyle Golson - "Darker Prisons" and Shawn Holland "Voted Most Likely
Not To Succeed, But God...!")
After seven years my contract with Publish America ended and I was
thankful for them giving me a chance. It was great to see your book in
a store and to get some sales. Once the change happened I decided
to publish the book myself, which happened two years after
Foundation of the Fire, Repeat Offender, and In The Beginning.
During that time, the book was updated and fixed to sound better. It
wasn't huge changes but large enough to make the sound and quality
of "Roses" better. Now with a new look and having a Kindle version, I'm
hoping for great things with my first published book.
completed book. That started when I was a kid and wrote a fantasy
book about some wizard that saved his town. This was in fourth grade
and from there start my love of writing. After that I wrote a variety of
stories and even finished a book called "Heatwave." It was nice but not
realistic and will probably never see the light of day.
WRC started as an idea that spawned from religion and psychology
class at The Ohio State University. We talked about people suffering
from multiple personality disorder and how religion plays apart. When
Roses Cry went through a variety of changes and I learned how to
write a book professionally. I tried to get it publish by the traditional
means but received a plethora of rejection letters. I even tried other
book ideas with more no's. Finally I heard about Publish America and
used them to publish my first book. That was great and exciting time. It
was cool to see the contract and even told other people to use them
(Kyle Golson - "Darker Prisons" and Shawn Holland "Voted Most Likely
Not To Succeed, But God...!")
After seven years my contract with Publish America ended and I was
thankful for them giving me a chance. It was great to see your book in
a store and to get some sales. Once the change happened I decided
to publish the book myself, which happened two years after
Foundation of the Fire, Repeat Offender, and In The Beginning.
During that time, the book was updated and fixed to sound better. It
wasn't huge changes but large enough to make the sound and quality
of "Roses" better. Now with a new look and having a Kindle version, I'm
hoping for great things with my first published book.
The title stems from a poem I wrote many years ago. A version of it is in the book and it came to mind after hearing a song
called "Dolphin's Cry" by Live. Some people think that it's a romance novel because of the title. Its far from that even though
there is a love interest and some romance.
Previous Ideas for the title was "Nosotros", "The We" and even the other poem in the book, "Beauty Wrapped In Harmony."
Nosotros was really alternate identities. I know many people like the title and said it intrigues them to take a look. Which is
excellent.
called "Dolphin's Cry" by Live. Some people think that it's a romance novel because of the title. Its far from that even though
there is a love interest and some romance.
Previous Ideas for the title was "Nosotros", "The We" and even the other poem in the book, "Beauty Wrapped In Harmony."
Nosotros was really alternate identities. I know many people like the title and said it intrigues them to take a look. Which is
excellent.
COVER
BACKGROUND
TITLE
The cover has gone through some changes. The
original idea was the cover used by the first When
Roses Cry. It involved a woman's face with a vase full
of roses. The company added the glowing eyes which
was cool. The old cover is to the side and on
amazon.com. However, you can't buy the old version
but can view it from that site.
For the new cover, I loved the eyes and kept them but
made it one rose instead of several. I love the other
cover, but can't use it because it was created by
Publish America. It took awhile to get this
cover right and there was an alternate version. Look
over to the side
and see another version which has the black rose.
The problem with
the black rose and glowing red eyes, is that it looked
a little too dark.
But trust me it was really close to being the new cover.
For a time
the Kindle had an all red rose cover with the eyes
throughout.
original idea was the cover used by the first When
Roses Cry. It involved a woman's face with a vase full
of roses. The company added the glowing eyes which
was cool. The old cover is to the side and on
amazon.com. However, you can't buy the old version
but can view it from that site.
For the new cover, I loved the eyes and kept them but
made it one rose instead of several. I love the other
cover, but can't use it because it was created by
Publish America. It took awhile to get this
cover right and there was an alternate version. Look
over to the side
and see another version which has the black rose.
The problem with
the black rose and glowing red eyes, is that it looked
a little too dark.
But trust me it was really close to being the new cover.
For a time
the Kindle had an all red rose cover with the eyes
throughout.
JUNE CHARACTER
June's character is a composite of many people she came in contact or needed. I don't want to go into a lot of detailed (have to
read the book) but they truly run the gambit of different people. The original story was suppose to be first person from June or at
least completely her POV. The problem was the switching characters. At the time I was not an experience writer and didn't feel
comfortable enough to write the book from all of her various character point of views. Each character makes their way into the
story but some not as much as others. Also once I learned about co-conscious then it became easy to have the characters
interact.
While reading the book, there is an explanation on multiple personality disorder and dissociate identity disorder. This is done on
purpose so you're not lost in the book and can follow what's going on. Having an explanation not only helped me, but allow the
story to be easy for all those who buy.
read the book) but they truly run the gambit of different people. The original story was suppose to be first person from June or at
least completely her POV. The problem was the switching characters. At the time I was not an experience writer and didn't feel
comfortable enough to write the book from all of her various character point of views. Each character makes their way into the
story but some not as much as others. Also once I learned about co-conscious then it became easy to have the characters
interact.
While reading the book, there is an explanation on multiple personality disorder and dissociate identity disorder. This is done on
purpose so you're not lost in the book and can follow what's going on. Having an explanation not only helped me, but allow the
story to be easy for all those who buy.
CHANGE OF CHARACTER NAMES
I tell anyone who writes to create an excel sheet or chart with your characters. Sometimes you start writing a character and
will either change their name or forget what you called them. I know it sounds ridiculous, but it can happen. Many of the
characters in WRC had their names changed. Because of this I had to keep a list so I wouldn't add confusion within the
story.
Esmeralda was actually called Esperanza and her nickname was Espy. Instead somewhere in the middle of the book I
changed her name to Esmeralda. Not exactly sure why, but when I went back to edit I was completely confused on who
Esperanza was. Instead of changing her name to the original I just kept the new name. Maybe I'll use Esperanza later.
Spencer's original name was Royal. There was a joke in the middle of the book using his name but had to be taken out
because it didn't make sense. I liked the name but it got changed because I wanted the absolute main character to have the
letter "R" for their first name. This is the only book where that will be true, and from now on will use whatever letter makes
sense for that character. So instead of Royal he became Spencer and one of June's personalities went from Sonja to
Raven.
Louis' name was always that but he was suppose to be called Louis Drake. Always. I think in my mind it would've been funny
for someone to be called by their first and last name all the time. That joke died immediately when the words started to be
typed so he was just Louis. That's it. Nothing more, but you do learn his last name.
Chase's name was not because of the bank. Nor was it a name due to my job (I didn't work at the bank when writing the
book). Instead it was because she pursued Spencer so strong. There where other names in mind, but nothing as strong as
Chase. Even still I like the name so much I might have to use it for future novels.
will either change their name or forget what you called them. I know it sounds ridiculous, but it can happen. Many of the
characters in WRC had their names changed. Because of this I had to keep a list so I wouldn't add confusion within the
story.
Esmeralda was actually called Esperanza and her nickname was Espy. Instead somewhere in the middle of the book I
changed her name to Esmeralda. Not exactly sure why, but when I went back to edit I was completely confused on who
Esperanza was. Instead of changing her name to the original I just kept the new name. Maybe I'll use Esperanza later.
Spencer's original name was Royal. There was a joke in the middle of the book using his name but had to be taken out
because it didn't make sense. I liked the name but it got changed because I wanted the absolute main character to have the
letter "R" for their first name. This is the only book where that will be true, and from now on will use whatever letter makes
sense for that character. So instead of Royal he became Spencer and one of June's personalities went from Sonja to
Raven.
Louis' name was always that but he was suppose to be called Louis Drake. Always. I think in my mind it would've been funny
for someone to be called by their first and last name all the time. That joke died immediately when the words started to be
typed so he was just Louis. That's it. Nothing more, but you do learn his last name.
Chase's name was not because of the bank. Nor was it a name due to my job (I didn't work at the bank when writing the
book). Instead it was because she pursued Spencer so strong. There where other names in mind, but nothing as strong as
Chase. Even still I like the name so much I might have to use it for future novels.
FAMILIAR CITIES
To make the book simple I used cities that I was familiar with. The original story was suppose to take place in Los Angeles.
This way it made Chase going after Spencer make sense. However, I decided that I didn't know that much about the city and
chose to base the book in my hometown, Columbus, Ohio. There's still a brief showing of L.A. in the book but I also had some
of the story to take place in Chattanooga. I've been to the Tennessee many times because of family. This made the story
easy to build and navigate. In the revised copy of When Roses Cry, the new stadium in Indianapolis is mentioned. In the old
version, the RCA Dome was talked about. That's just one of the many changes that happened so the story would feel modern.
This way it made Chase going after Spencer make sense. However, I decided that I didn't know that much about the city and
chose to base the book in my hometown, Columbus, Ohio. There's still a brief showing of L.A. in the book but I also had some
of the story to take place in Chattanooga. I've been to the Tennessee many times because of family. This made the story
easy to build and navigate. In the revised copy of When Roses Cry, the new stadium in Indianapolis is mentioned. In the old
version, the RCA Dome was talked about. That's just one of the many changes that happened so the story would feel modern.
WHEN ROSES CRY 2?
So many books and films have sequels. I had thought about it for When Roses Cry but really don't see that happening. In
reality it doesn't make sense even though there is a way to do it. What really perked my interest would be a prequel. There
are flashbacks in the story that gives you a glimpse of June's life. It's tough and gritty. However I think it would be interesting
to delve into her life before and after her time with her dad. It's tough so the end of the book would be interesting but as of
right now there are other stories that will hit the market. However, if enough books get sold and people show an interest, who
knows.
reality it doesn't make sense even though there is a way to do it. What really perked my interest would be a prequel. There
are flashbacks in the story that gives you a glimpse of June's life. It's tough and gritty. However I think it would be interesting
to delve into her life before and after her time with her dad. It's tough so the end of the book would be interesting but as of
right now there are other stories that will hit the market. However, if enough books get sold and people show an interest, who
knows.
When Roses Cry